"Hills Like White Elephants"
"Hills Like White Elephants," is a short story, written by author Ernest Hemingway. It is a story about a man and a woman waiting at a train station talking about an issue that they never name. I believe this issue is abortion. In this paper I will prove that the girl in the story, who's name is Jig, finally decides to go ahead and have the baby even though the man, who does not have a name, wants her to have an abortion. It is the end of the story that makes me think this.
First of all I will prove that it is an abortion that this couple is discussing. The man says that it is an "operation," and an abortion is an operation. Also, he says that it is "just to let the air in," which can be interpreted as meaning that the doctors who are performing the abortion will let the air into the uterus as they remove the fetus (283). The man says that he has "known lots of people that have done it." Which suggests that this is a common operation like an abortion. It also shows the moral depravity of the world of these people because so many women are having abortions. Finally, the man says that he wants their relationship to be "just like we were before" (284). This suggests that the relationship has changed, as it would with a baby, if the girl has an abortion things will return to the same as before the pregnancy. We don't know what the couple acted like before the pregnancy, however, we are certainly not meant to like their behavior as they talk about the abortion.
Now that I have established that the couple is having an abortion, I will establish the girl's behavior because this is important for figuring out the way in which she has made up her mind at the end of the story. Early in the story we get a glimpse at Jig's disgust with her male partner. She looks at the hills in the distance and says "They look like white elephants" (282). The man responds that he has "never seen one" after which he drinks more beer (282). Jig then responds: "No, you wouldn't have" (292). The man gets really defensive when she says this, Jig ignores him. The scene is important because it shows that from the very beginning of the story Jig is talking down to the man and does not have much respect for him. The fact that she is not surprised he's never seen a white elephant. She thinks him to be a narrow-minded pig. A white elephant is something that is unwanted. And this guy never deals with things that he does not want. He just shuts his mind to them. The girl in this seen seems to recognize this fact.
Since we see the girl acting with condescension and sarcasm right in the first scene when the couple talks about white elephants, we need to keep this attitude in mind when we read there subsequent conversations. For example. On page 284 Jig says "Then I'll do it. Because I don't care about me." On the same page she also says "I'll do it and then everything will be fine" (284). The man responds to this by saying that "I don't want you to do it if you feel that way" (284). The reader is left asking, "feel what way?" Clearly the man has picked up on something that we the readers have not been told by the narrator of the story. The mans mention of "feel that way" suggests that Jig is not using a sincere tone when she says that she does not care about herself and she will do it to make everything fine. Most likely, drawing on the evidence of the discussion of white elephants, we can conclude that Jig is being sarcastic here. She does care about herself and she does not think everything will be OK. This is an important point.
Closer to the end of the story, on page 286, the man keeps making comments like "I don't care anything about it." As has been seen, the man does care about it and Jig has become upset by his insincere statements. She tries to shut him up by saying "please please please please please please stop talking" and also "I'll scream" (286). Both her condescending attitude toward the man earlier and her efforts to shut him out at this point in the story suggest that she is totally fed up with his advice and is going to make her own decision. We see that she does this at the end:
He picked up the two heavy bags and carried them around the station to the other racks. He looked up the tracks but could not see the train. Coming back, he walked through the barroom, where people waiting for the train were drinking. He drank an Anis at the bar and looked at the people. They were all waiting reasonably for the train. He went out through the bead curtain. She was sitting at the table and smiled at him. (286)
This is the first time she has smiled or seemed content in the entire story. She was not content when the guy was bullying her into getting an abortion, so we can conclude that her happiness at this point in the story is the result of being left alone for a few minutes so that she could decide what she want to do on her own. Her final comment that "There's nothing wrong with me" lets us know that she no longer sees the pregnancy as something "wrong" (286). She has accepted her pregnancy and plans to keep the baby.
In conclusion, Ernest Hemingway's short story "Hills Like White Elephants" is about a man and a woman struggling to deal with an unwanted baby. The author, Hemingway, never explicitly tells us what the girl decides to do about the baby, but he does give us enough clues to figure out what she has decided by the end of the story. These clues have to do with the story's tone like the way that the things that the guy says make us understand Jig's tone of disapproval. Overall this story is like an iceberg with most of the substance hiding beneath the surface.
Word Count: 1070
Preparing Your Essay on "Hills"
Rationale: This sequence of tasks is designed to simulate some of the process of creating an informed interpretation of a story by reading on your own, getting views of other students, a prof, and critics.
Step 1. Read "Hills Like White Elephants." Read the story in your textbook or in any library's copy of the collected stories of Ernest Hemingway. On a first reading, make some notes for yourself, especially
- your impressions of Jig, the American, their problems,
- any object that might be symbolic in the story
- questions you might have about the story.
Step 2. Read commentary and questions of others. Use the study guide for the story online at the Litonline website to take advantage of observations by previous classes by reading the gray block at the beginning and the right-hand column (black print) to see if you can find plausible answers to your questions. Write more notes on your first impressions about
- the characters
- their methods of conversing
- their problem and how it influences their view of things around them
- symbolic objects
- any other ideas you have.
- Consider the contradiction between "Then I'll do it because I don't care about me" and the ending of the story, if you see a contradiction.
Step 3. Read more student comments on the story. Another set of comments annotates the story (link removed at the insistence of Hemingway's current publisher, Simon and Schuster) as read by students and a teacher at Virginia Commonwealth University (VCU). Three "tracks" of passages are marked for you in three colors and indicate two symbols in the story, plus character and conversation traits. Look for the question marks in squares early in the story to get started.
- References to the curtain or its beads
- Jig's questions
- References to the hills
Jot down new ideas or changes in your view of the story, focusing perhaps on their conversational tactics, their relationship, or one of the color-coded ideas from the VCU annotations.
Step 4. Read preliminary views from a previous class and one professor's views.
Step 5. Read summaries of professional critics' commentaries. You can do a "key word" search on this long scroll by following the directions on the page of summaries. Basically, you can use the keyboard keys <Ctrl> + <f> (Hold a "ctrl" key on your keyboard and tap the "f" key once--after you have clicked the link in the first line of this paragraph and your screen has switched to the long page of summaries). For example, you can see what various critics have said about the curtain, the hills, Jig, the American, and other issues in the story.
Your task is to let the critics' ideas add to your own, as well as noting if their ideas contradict yours or reinforce them. Jot down quotable quotes--with "quotation marks," of course--from the story and from the summaries.
|Essay Assignment: Write your definitive essay about some aspect of "Hills Like White Elephants." Some grading criteria: The best answers will acknowledge by name the student writer or critic whose views contributed to the answer, as well as acknowledging opposing viewpoints before refuting them. |
Whether you depend on the views of others or strike out on your own depends on your topic. For instance, many critics have written about what the couple might do next or who "wins," Jig or the American. Hardly anyone, however, has written about the symbolic value of the oncoming train.
To assure your readers (and teacher) that your view is well informed, you must quote the phrases that guided and helped form your views. Acknowledge by name the ideas of critics or the location of ideas, e.g. from the VCU color-coded annotations or the Litonline right-column ideas.
Step 6. Read some sample essays about "Hills." Successful essays by previous students are linked in the list that follows.
Some Suggestions for Topics: The following topics indicate the level of difficulty you should attempt after the six steps above.
|Grading Hints: The best essays display the following traits, which demonstrate ingenuity, as well as control over the basics for writing a persuasive essay. |
Each of the sample essays shows "extensive support" and "style," but most do not address an ending as appropriate for a particular historical era, and most do not acknowledge critics or other students. You don't have to repeat these oversights. In fact, if you leave out other readers' views, since I've provided multiple examples, you will be asked to revise to add them and to comment on those you mention.